My favorite subject is Legal Psychology.I like Legal Psychology because I am interested on prevention. My thought is that being in prison has multiple causes, specially related to structural factor in society that I am willing to transform.
My teacher is Carolina Villagra.
I have learnt in this semester that is important to avoid that people being in jail situation. And when people are in jail society has the obligation to provide human condition to people jailed.
Every day ten persons died in prisons, every day persons are raped in jail, because nobody is responsible for protect the prisoner’s human rights. We need a real change in our justice understanding that market economy does not works in prisons system.
Finally I have learnt that alternative measures to prisons are more effective than prisons itself.
Good effort, Camila, but there are serious mistakes that you need to stop making.
ReplyDelete1. After a connector you need a subejct: "I have learnt in this semester that IT is important to...
2. Can you correct these sentencee: "to avoid that people being in jail situation."
3. And when people are in jail society has the obligation to provide human condition "to people jailed."
4. When you express a habit as with the word "Every day" the verb is in present tense.
Analyze: "Every day ten persons died in prisons", What´s wrong?
You say: "market economy does not works in prisons system." or MARKET ECONOMY DOES NOT WORK??
AND: Think of this sentence: "alternative measures to prisons are more effective than prisons itself." What´s wrong?
You get 1.5 points.
Paula